Long descriptions tend to distract and bore readers. Keep them:
S Short
U Unique
M Memorable
That's the sum of it. Here is an example from Chapter 7 of my latest novel, Uncharted Waters.
"Lacey's most distinguishing feature was his eyebrows. They resembled two centipedes about to attack each other as they crossed the bridge of his nose."
You may read more at: www.amazon.com/author/www.saradubose.com
S Short
U Unique
M Memorable
That's the sum of it. Here is an example from Chapter 7 of my latest novel, Uncharted Waters.
"Lacey's most distinguishing feature was his eyebrows. They resembled two centipedes about to attack each other as they crossed the bridge of his nose."
You may read more at: www.amazon.com/author/www.saradubose.com
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